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A wonderful ending for this story!

Wonderful weaving of the topic, life and lessons. I LOVED the voice ... and I LOVED how everything worked together in this. Any names? ;)
I especially loved the line "I'm ready too." This was an emotional piece I enjoyed very much!
A very good story. I did have trouble at times deciding who was speaking. But this was a very good example of how God walks us through our trials. And how he doesn't always change the trial, but often changes our heart instead.
Heartwarming and sweet! Nice job. :) Blessings, Jo
A heart-touching story. I really liked the way you conveyed the differnce between your feelings and the comfort you gave your daughter. Congrats on being a grandma. (Is this her actual due date?)
Just lovely, Terri, as always. I felt like I was right there.
Lovely story. Well written, emotional, and captivating. Woven together with lots of love . . . I can tell.
I was a little confused on the tag lines as to whom was speaking, but other than that your ability to evoke emotions through your writing shined through.
This reminded me of my first pregnancy. I wasn't ready to be a mom -- and my mom wasn't ready to be a grandma. This was really nicely done.
This gave me goose bumps. Loved the ending. Very nicely done.
So very sweet and touching! My little grandson is due in three months and I want to show this to my daughter. Thanks for sharing it