The Official Writing Challenge
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Intriguing title, vivid descriptions, and sinister feel. I would not like to visit that shop in the writer's story!
Well-written and very descriptive story! The ending took me by surprise, but when I recalled your title it all made sense.
You carried me all the way through with this. Good writing. Sure was glad to go back to reality!
You took me with you - I could see it all with your talent of descriptive writing. In some ways I wish it wasn't a dream.. would have liked to know how you got out of there!
Wow - you set a great scene with vivid detail! I could see everything and wished it had been true. Loved the echoing sound like horses...Nice writing!
I agree; get rid of Andrew and finish the story. You left me back in the craft shop. :)