The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/06
Love the different take of the story--espicially the wife wailing on the hubby. I did see a small typo 'angles' instead of 'angels'. But other than that, I enjoyed the story.
12/15/06
What fun! I enjoyed the modern idioms giving such a familar story new freshness. And the shepherd's disguise was a very clever twist.
12/19/06
What a great take on the story of His Birth! Loved it.
12/19/06
Oh, I loved this! Great POV, wonderful writing. Well done!
12/20/06
A very nice telling of this familiar story. Love the title! Thanks for sharing this.
I enjoyed this very much. It's quite a unique take on this much-loved story. Well done.
12/20/06
Loved your unique take on this! Thank you for this story at this time of year especially! Very tender.
12/22/06
I loved this story! One of my favorites! Great take on the subject, and a touching tribute to the earthly father of our Savior. Kudos!