The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/06
So sweet. So childlike. A precious story of parent and child. Nicely written, also.
11/27/06
Truly sweet and touching. It's a good example of how a child learns to love and to trust. Beautiful written from a child's perspective.
11/30/06
What a sweet little story. I noticed there was some punctuation missing in parts and some lonely sentences which could have been kept in paragraphs, but I really enjoyed reading it. It sounded very realistic. Good writing.