The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way you wove the story within the words of this wonderful song - very effective! Great characterization.
Your descriptions drew me into this intensely written story. I also liked the way you created a story around the words from this song.
Congratulations ... don't know how I overlooked this, but it is wonderfully done! A well-deserved win, for sure! God bless! :)
Oh, Deborah.... I "enjoyed" this story. No, I didn't! This story frightened me. I have a twenty-eight year old son named Landon who was on the swim team in high school. Your story was too realistic for me, too detailed. Thanks a lot! Job well done!
This is beautiful! I love the lyrics interspersed throughout the story. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
I got called away from this story half way through ... and walked away singing that song. Powerful story. Very good work.