The Official Writing Challenge
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Very thought-provoking - great use of imagery to make your point. I enjoyed this!
Captivating images! I can really see those fires along the ridge of the cavern and those individual fire fighters, each so skillfully described! Very creative! Sure glad I was able to get back on to read this!
Very good! I definitely see your point, but you made it enjoyable and fun to read. I love the way you took this serious subject and made it easy to digest. Thanks for sharing this.
This is excellent! The first couple of paragraphs, in my humble opinion, were not the best way to start this entry. Still an amateur here, I might have started first with the beginning of paragraph 3, then brought in the exposition/background of paragraphs 1 and 2. But once I 'got started' I was hooked and found this to be a wonderful read! Wonderful job!
You have some profound truths in here, Sharlyn. Well done.