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I love taking the scenic route also. We just did that recently - decided to take a small side road full of farms and quaint houses instead of the highway. I don't know much about poetry, so I can't really comment on style. But you drew a picture in my mind and made me want to go for a drive.
Free verse I would assume, or short lined prose; but nice trip down memory lane. Enjoyed the trip. Thanks
Love the scenic beauty of this poem. You have a great eye for detail, which you painted artistically on your canvas.
This brings back memories of drives in the past. We always loved to take the "unbeaten" path. God's creation is so lovely. I was riding with you through the towns and counrtyside.
If you can't go, what a beautiful way to get there. I just took the trip through your eyes!