The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 629 times
Member Comments
Excellent message and nicely written.
Interesting concept in your comparisons. I like this. (A few notes: everything startED to go wrong ... I lookED to - watch the tenses.) Overall, this is a nicely crafted article with a good message. :)
Nice piece of work here, but very, very complicated. First "I was playing the viola"...then suddenly "playing the harp, the trumpet..."; and by then the reader is lost somewhere in the maize of - Who is playing What?. However, some fine writing and a good message can be found amongst this confusion. Well done.
I like the way you picture God as the Conducter and His followers as musicians. I knew what was coming when I saw all the "he's" capitalized. Well done but you could have made it longer and included a Biblical quote.