The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
Lovely, lovely poem. Sounds as though you're British. Am I right? Reading this, I'm reminded of the old Bards, like Byron & Wordsworth. Nice work.
08/20/06
Great poem. I enjoyed it. I might change the title. You're too talented to borrow a title from someone else.
08/22/06
wonderful language. Your words are unique and touching. Great job!