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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hope (05/04/06)
Spring has more than cheer in each new year; the season has hope for all who hear...of heaven's door...wide open as before...before autumn leaves fall before our doors...closed in purpose and intent or sprung wide with compliments...to all who hear and see and feel the breeze of winds swept through the trees...in blossom and in content with a rose, perhaps, or prairie dust or without a fuss...we try to bless each other now in God's will as before...now we praise our Creator for the glories and majesty of Spring...let the anthems ring for the risen King...Christ Jesus is His name...glorious is His fame..and righteous is His being...in this marvellous Springtime of hope, happiness and healing; blessings of springy spring to all...and to all God's children...special rewards to you!Praise the Spring's beauties too! And thank you!
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dub W
05/12/06
A virtual prose poem. Work on this some more and think about how to expand it to a full powerful work. Keep writing.
Sally Hanan
05/13/06
If you rearranged this it would make a great modern hymn, as your lyrics are really good. In this format it was hard to read - perhaps posting it in line by line poetry form would make it easier.
Dr. Sharon Schuetz
05/14/06
This is good. Watch your spelling. Beautiful.
Sherril Wendling
05/17/06
Some shining moments here!
I like, "...before autumn leaves fall before our doors...closed in purpose and intent or sprung wide with compliments." This is poetry, so please don't be afraid to arrange it to look like poetry--much easier on the reader. With practice, your verses can flow with your meaning, with rhyme simply a tool to make the journey pleasurable and memorable. Keep writing! There's a powerful voice inside you begging for release.