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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Inner Strength (04/20/06)
Sin is what keeps us from our Heavenly Father. We were made for His glory. We are supposed to give Him the glory he deserves, but we all fall short of Gods glory. We are all sinners! Everybody has sinned,everybody! The one was has never sinned is Jesus Christ himself!He fought off tempation that satan threw at him, he turned his cheek when he got riduculed.
Did this hurt him? More then likley. Did this stop to fullfill what he came here to do, No, It didn't! He came here in hopes that you will let him in your life! Your whole life!! Wrap your life in the salvation of Jesus Christ!! He is the reason you are here! Our life is not about you, it is about Jesus Christ.
Can you hear that? Listen,listen very closely! Open that door!! It is the knock that will change your life forever!! A life that begins with TRUST! Wrap yourself in the love of salvation!
He is waiting for you! Open that door!
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Helen Paynter
04/28/06
Excellent message. It would be more reader-friendly (and after all, you want people to read it) if you expanded it a bit - so each thought is developed a bit more in separate paragraphs; and if you used fewer exclamation marks. Exclamation marks, like capitals, make the reader feel shouted at, which may not be the effect you desire. GOd bless you for your passion to communicat his goodness
Jan Ackerson
04/30/06
The image of being wrapped in salvation is very appealing. Choose strong verbs and nouns, and you won't need the exclamation points. Your passion is loud and clear; good job.