The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title was quite captivating. I knew I wanted to read this entry as soon as it would be available. I like how your story went beyond describing the relationship with a frenemy to unfolding the realization of how deceitful these relationships can be. And I’m glad your protagonist left for good!
02/21/25
Quite the complex tale of deceit here, which would benefit from more para breaks to keep us with you. However, I like your simple wrap up.