The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story. I like the way you drew us in with your "right there" perspective and inner monologue. The ending brought out an epiphany in your character, with plenty of emotion. Well done. Keep writing.
03/14/24
I loved your story because it was so real. It was the number one pick for me personally. How quick we are to want to be in the "In-Crowd", but the struggle to stay there isn't worth the energy and work it take to get there and even more to stay there.
The in-crowd says come as we are, but Jesus says come as you are and I will make you who you were made to be.
Please, keep writing!

Naoma Bird