The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/23
Great job! Nice message filled with truths.

I especially liked this part:

"We make choices and decisions without seeking God in prayer first seeking to know what He has mapped out for us. We can allow pride or arrogance gets in the way and we run ahead of God." Amen!

God Bless~
07/27/23
I loved the correlation you have of our home not being the one we are currently living in.

I saw a couple of grammar things - "I was quite anxious about going because I would have to drive through Macon myself as my husband had work, he had to do that day." There is a misplaced (unnecessary) comma here.

Also, run the preview before submitting so you can see what your entry looks like - extra spaces between the paragraphs would make this an easier, and a more attractive looking read.

Finally - check your title! Your entry has the correct spelling, but when you entered it for the contest, you misspelled it.
Excellent job. Loved the detailed experience of being lost. Loved the positive ending with specific scripture. Keep writing.
Great entry. So close to home in several ways.:)
Your writing made it easy to identify with the feeling of being anxious and lost.
I also like that someone was loving enough to point out a few gramatical errors. They are like gold. If you appreciate the wisdom of the experienced- you are going to be unstoppable.
Cheers.