The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the re-telling of Bible stories. They include details that may have actually happened like his mother teaching him.
Kind of weak on using piece and peace as integral to the story. I would have liked to see more "showing" of what it was like to be a blind beggar.
Keep writing.
02/27/23
I enjoyed your take on this biblical story.
I like your writing style! This was very readable and interesting.