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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: REDEEM (03/03/22)
When I think of bettering myself, I try work on my faith in God or try to be a good parent, and a spouse. I realize that nobody is perfect including me.
There are others I bettered myself such as continuing my education in college after I graduated high school or working a health food resturant, and learning more about health food. Soya burgers was one things besides baking.

When I was a young child in kindergarten, and in grade 1, I screamed a lot when things did not go my way. If one of the older kids picked on me, I screamed, and they went away. One year later, my behaviour improved. I never screamed when I was in grade 2. Even when a child a bit younger than me had bit I didn't scream. I just told the teacher who punished the child who bit me in the wrist.

I am trying to work on my anxiety. I try to live one day at a time like Jesus said for us to do, but it is not easy. I often think about next week or next month. Nobody knows what will happen then. I often think will I have enough money for next week or the end of the month. I pray for that anxiety to stop, and it works. I also want to keep improving on writing, and living without worrying about anything.
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Laurie Bahlke
03/10/22
Keep on writing and let your words pour from you in order to heal your anxiety and doubt. Improving takes time and practice, but you can do it. Proofread your work and be careful to catch grammar or spelling mistakes. (This is the same advice I give to myself!). Take care and keep writing!
Naoma Bird
03/10/22
Hearing your heart in what you write. Keep writing!
Philippa Geaney
03/11/22
Yes, I agree with the above comments- your heart can clearly be heard in your words. The experts say the way to improve is with practice.
I think writing is a little like flying. Sometimes we catch the Holy Spirit Wind and soar. Sometimes we stay earthbound and tend the craft. Not nearly as wonderful but it is important too. So soar dear writer, and also tend the craft (spelling, diction, punctuation).
I need practice what I preach. 😂
I hope you continue writing.
Avigail David
03/12/22
Your desire to mature, improve yourself in the art and craft of skillful writing is very inspiring to me. I trust and have the vote of confidence in you that you will. And enjoy your God-given gift and talent at the same time. :-)

God has a very good plan for your life.

Be blessed all your days.

Evelyn Sprouse Rowe
03/17/22
I do believe you have shown a form of redemption here. By writing about your redeeming quality of self improvement over your years of life. Also you continue pursuing challenge as you improve as a writer. As the scripure says..."redeeming the time". Keep writing you are inspiring.