The Official Writing Challenge
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This is good, worth perfecting. I think your ending list of sentences need to be rewritten in the same style as your opening paragraphs, though . Give it a try. I bet you will be happier with the piece. It will feel more cohesive, more finished.
04/24/20
That is a beautiful psalm!
04/25/20
Good take on refuge. Check your spellings and tenses but good story!