The Official Writing Challenge
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As a former logger myself, I can certainly identify with Angus! I had to switch from using chainsaws and driving log skidders to using lab equipment and computers, not an easy change!
06/09/19
Interesting story of seniors coming into the digital age. For me, I felt this was weak on the topic. You could have focused on Angus asking more questions on how things worked, and that would have hit the topic. I've learned that you really have to have the topic as the main focus, and not just a brief reference. One of my first entries, the topic was "Yellow." I told a great story, and only referred to the yellow metal rowboat of my wanderings on a mountain lake in a electrical storm. I should have focused on the color yellow.
Delightful story. Blessings
06/12/19
I like the complexity of words and phrases used in this story which makes this simple story of "seniors into the digital age" into something more interesting. I do agree with the previous comment, though, that more focus on the topic would be a good idea.