The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/18
Good job with the imagery in this piece. I enjoyed the contrasts between the unsteady elements of nature and the steadiness of God
As this is free verse I would do away with the punctuation - no periods necessary for sentence fragments. Also the scripture address and source disrupts the flow and distracts the eye. Noted at the bottom would have sufficed.
Blessings and keep writing.
You show a masterful grasp on painting with words - well done