The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/16
Interesting parallels. Red ink: white space between paragraphs so it doesn't all run together.
05/15/16
Creative and well done.
I enjoyed this.

Blessings~
05/18/16
You make some good points about Santa, though they are crowded as has already been said. You have also stepped around the topic, which may reduce your judging score.
05/19/16
Congratulations, Sylvia, on your highly commendable piece of writing in the Intermediate category.

Even though Santa is not real, I think that he symbolizes giving to others.
05/19/16
Congrats!

Blessings~