The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/14
Awww...what a touching entry. I loved it. Thank you for sharing.

God bless~
Love your heart for Iowa, which is a big part of my heritage as well. The piece comes across more as a memoir than a travelogue. Nevertheless, you have created wonderful word pictures of a special place. Nice writing.
11/18/14
I agree that this was beautifully written! Your descriptions were so vivid and lively, and I savored each one! A favorite was the following: "As the snow would fly across the field, it formed white swooping drifts with peaks and tips that curled like waves on an angry ocean. The frozen clumps appeared to be chunks of driftwood and the stems like pieces of buried ships reaching skyward, marking their place so they could be found in spring." Exquisite!! Also, your ending was just perfect!
11/20/14
Congrats!
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11/20/14
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR LEVEL 2 WIN!! I'm not surprised to see that your account did well! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 16 overall! Happy Dance!