The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Yes, I know how that is. My desire to write had been killed for forty years by an overly zealous English teacher who gave an F if there was one missplaced comma or run on sentence. I like your message.
I really like everything about this entry. It flows well and has such an important message in a gentle, non-judgmental way.
I really like this. Well written, easy to understand and a great message. Fun!
01/18/05
You conveyed very clearly the message that we in all our adult superiority crush little spirits so easy. Sometimes, we forget to build up as opposed to tear down. Thanks for sharing.
What a delightful story! Thanks for sharing!
I especially enjoyed the conversation between grandfather and grandchild. Good work.
01/21/05
great insight! I've learned so much more when my teachers patiently encourage my efforts
I enjoyed this story. It was very nice. God bless you.