The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/08
I simply love your title...and this is exactly where I am at now with my kids....UUGH..someone else understands....I love your gift of one minute of silence at the end...Great story and good descriptions..I love "wind up toys on steroids" :)
11/21/08
Me too! And I teach a K-3 class. I'm looking forward to Christmas but I could sure use a few of those gifts under my tree! Great story!
Cute story. :) Caught one typo where Ava became Eva, but no loss to the story line. :)
11/27/08
Kathy, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 2, placing 10th for the level.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)