The Official Writing Challenge
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I stopped here because of the title and was rewarded with terrific writing! Your character and snipits of his memory were vivid. I kept thinking how the dialogue was so true to real life. I think this is well written and hopefully you will place and if not then you will take it further and be sure it gets published somewhere.:)
This is so well written. You succeeded in touching my heart (and eyes, with tears) in the dialog between father and daughter. I hope you get this published---perhaps it is just right for a tract format. Certainly, a lot of folks need help with priorities, and here is a gentle message aimed at the heart.