The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/05
Its obvious that you did some research when you prepared your article for this topic. It almost feels like you tried to fit in too much. If you had expanded more on two or three of the OT characters, instead of trying to fit in so many, it may have been more effective. Nice writing though - thanks for posting!
Actually, what I liked was the variety of examples. The stories are so well known that digging through them detail by detail can be tedious reading. here you gave us a quick look on the same theme. It made it easier reading for me personally. It all came back to God keeps trying to find the ones who really want to walk the whole distance...