The Official Writing Challenge
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03/07/05
Absolutely love this...I wanted to read each line to see where this was going...a pleasure indeed...great illustration.
Wonderful piece. It cracked me up! I can easily see this in the Highlights magazine. You may want to tweak some of your word a bit for a younger reading audience. Imagine the illustrations! It would be hilarious. Please put this one in your portfolio (and submit it to one of the children's magazines). Awesome job!
03/08/05
fantabulous poem. LOVED IT! wonderfully done. God's gifts are awesome!
03/08/05
I can't even imagine how you came up with this! I enjoyed it, very clever.
03/10/05
Very original. I agree this would be great for children's article.Great writing.

Kathy
Great Children's book here! Delightful read
03/11/05
Yes, VERY cute and appropriate for a children's magazine. With a little tweaking here and there, it should be published. Well done. ~L~
03/11/05
Wonderful. Everyone else has said it all already but I loved it too.