The Official Writing Challenge
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"I refuse to charge You foolishly..." This is a marvelous prayer, and a wonderful testimony to your inner, God-given strength.
I too liked the line "I am not going to charge you falsely" Overall while the message was a good one, it was too much tell and not enough show. The reason the hospital chapel hits home is because it is the first time in this piece that we get a glimpse of who the writer is and what they have been through. I want to know that first. I want to experience through words the lessons learned at Jesus feet.