The Official Writing Challenge
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Good. A call to be counter-cultural. God always does things upside down (Except when we're expecting that, of course!!)Thank you for this
Good job. We felt the tension and saw her gradually moving through the process. Your "ducks" were all lined up, no sudden revelations or lightning strikes. Well done.
Nice story! Consider ending it with "Then she reached for the phone." Let your readers draw the conclusion that you have gently drawn them toward. Good job.
I like this a lot! Well written and a satisfying ending - it's not about anything except Jesus. Good job.
I love reading about people who make the right choices for the right reasons. Great story!