The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great! Children are supposed to be the ones learning the lessons, but if we pay close attention, we can also learn from them!
Excellent piece.
02/22/05
Kids put things so succinctly, don't they! Thanks for the reminder of the importance of sharing.
02/22/05
Good entry. It taught a lesson we all need to remember. You write well, developing the story to the conclusion and using an opening that probably caught the attention of every parent on the site!
From the child to the adult, the lessons continue. It was a most thoughtful and enjoyable read.
02/24/05
They played together like a 'well-oiled machine". Not only did Logan learn the importance of sharing, he also learnt the joy of doing so. Very interesting article.
Your points are elegantly stated. A fine crafting! Thank you.
Great job. I've learned so many lessons from children. And here is another one. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!