The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
Loved this beautiful, Biblical story. One tiny grammatical error that I spotted: 'She begged Orpah and I ' should be 'She begged Orpah and me'.
But really excellent.
04/13/06
Beautiful "continuation" of the story. Well done.
04/14/06
I love exposition of little-known Biblical characters! Very nicely done; every element absolutely authentic.
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done!
04/18/06
Continuation? Did I miss something? You have a beautiful, flowing way with words. My favorite line: "It wasnt just your father who redeemed me, Obed; it was Yahweh."
Well written. I enjoyed this story.
04/20/06
Nice job, Birdie! Sounds like you had fun writing this.