The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I can't beleive how much information you wrote in this poem. it's truly beautiful!
Wonderful! As I was reading it, I was thinking that it needed a melody, and I was delighted when I got to the end to find that it has one! And one that I know! Absolutely beautiful, and it fits well with the hanuting melody in a minor key.
Oh how I love this. It is beautiful!
I like this - it would be a good song. One comment, watch its and it's (By letting darkness have it's day). Use "it is" to verify which is correct.
I like the way you changed the last line at the end (I need you more / I love you more). Very nice.
A beautiful poem! I loved it!