The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, how absolutely lovely!! You took me on a vacation of the mind and what a joy it is! Beautiful images!!! Thank you!
Great job! Your meter was really good and you painted a nice get away for all of us.
Let's GO! :-)

A lovely retreat through words and imagery. Such a nice flow and feeling...very soothing. LIked the "unlocking" and "locking" - a true fantasy with clear beginning and end.

Nice command of topic, style, content. Well done!!
Ahhhh ... this leaves you with a sigh. Beautiful imagery - one can almost feel the fresh breezes. Good writing, good read - refreshing. A place we can visit in this poem. Thank you.
I love being there...great job of taking us there.
Excellent poem, the whole package. Very soothing.
I floated away with you to paradise and took a long needed rest. Thank you.
A great entry for the topic "Escape"! I felt so serene in your magical wonderland of nature...a beautiful poetic way to find rest. (the topic, however, was lock...which You did mention locking it away for another day). Well done.