The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great perspective on an old story. Love your work.
This was a really great story. It was beautifully written, spoke volumns. The only thing I was a little fuzy was how "enter" related to your story. Was it related in the fact that the people (Jesus included) entered Martha's home? ANyways, good job.
03/07/06
I enjoyed this very much. One opinion: I would change the snatches of conversation to be one of Jesus' parables. Jesus recounting the feeding of the 5000 was almost like bragging. Having Peter recount the story instead would be fine.
Okay, a 2nd opinion: I would pick a different title, "Martha's Exasperation", or something.
I like this one - I wish it was mine.
03/08/06
Very good, I agree I would change the title too but other than that I liked your take on Martha.
03/09/06
You did great at letting us see into the heart of Martha and she experienced!
03/10/06
I agree. Anything that brings the Bible to life is OK with me and you did it very well. I'm looking forward to finding out who you are and reading your other stuff.