The Official Writing Challenge
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I LOVE this! *Standing up and applauding madly* Such creativity and word-smithery!
Excellent! I loved it from start to finish! I loved the sets of the three comparative words interspersed throughout the poem. I could picture the three "comforters" so clearly. The end was a stroke of genius. The only thing wrong with it - I didn't write it!
What can I say that hasn't already been said? Good stuff.
Enjoyed this, only I must say that I feel initially the three friends did come to "help." It's a good friend that will just sit with you for seven days and seven nights.
Wow! What a GREAT piece! Can't wait to read more of your work.
This is a great poem. Very original and fresh idea. Thank you for the read.
Creativity - A+!

I felt bounced along with your words - sort of got bruised/shocked/wakened up by the end. Very effective. :-)

This was extremely creative. I think it would make a great song. I could hear a little melody float in my head as I read this. Marvelous writing( as always). Great job!
This is really good. "Flat, flatter, flattest." When God speaks, we better listen. You have a good way with words.
You are a master wordsmith! I can see this in a Christian children's book...or acted out in a skit in church!