The Official Writing Challenge
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I held my breath as I read the description of the man nearing suicide. I liked the ending - it is not a writer's character, but a real person! "Began" is the past tense for "begin" and fits better in the final paragraph.
A couple of typos "due" instead of "do" and "loser" instead of looser. Needs some work on sentence structure but content was good with a great message.