The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. The descriptions read like poetry and the pace and rhthym are restful and meditative. There are one or two little edits I noticed (needn't/need not), but nothing distracting.

'transforming Adam from what he had become to what he once had been.' Stunning phrase. Wondeful stuff and God bless.
Oh Birdie, This is simply amazing. I'm not looking forward to having to compete against you in advanced, where I know you'll be soon! Beautiful crafting of words and ideas.
Beautifully written, and I love your last paragraph. One oops: it's self should be itself. An experience we all should undertake, I think.