The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
01/30/23
I found your story warm, and evocative of family closeness. You have made your character's very likeable within the word limit.
I wonder if it might not have focused on the buy/bye quite enough?
If I was asked what the story is about I think I'd say 'Two sisters spending the day together'. I hope I'm wrong becasue it is a well written and sweet.
Before I commented here I've gone and reread my own story and I think I definately have not practiced what I preach:()
What a lovely sisterhood!
Thanks for sharing
Blessings