The Official Writing Challenge
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I like that concept- i-art.

You should created doubles spaces between your paragraphs for easier reading. When I come across entries that are one long line of words, I groan. Look at other entries and see how pleasant is the appearance when paragraphs are broken up.

You have great use of words, but try to open them up so others want to read them!
09/14/20
A good message. I agree with Barbara’s comments on the spacing.
Congrats on your first place win!