The Official Writing Challenge
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The tense shifts made the opening a little confusing, the outline also wandered a bit perhaps the abundance of non essential words. I think you have the start of something here. I hope to read more.
I am not great with tense shifts technology, but I felt the first few paragraphs were just a bit difficult for me to get on the run way. But then your story flew in the wind. Loved the story, and I enjoy reading true stories like these. God bless ya, littlelight
Intriguing article. Well written. Is this really true?
I'm wondering that too ... is it really true? The way you led into it with you both sitting on the highway was effective. Well done.
Yes, it's true - and only the pastor's wife believes me...since she saw one identical to mine. A very eerie sight indeed!