The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
Such a beautiful testimony to our Lord and Savior, filling my soul with thoughts of His love and sacrifice for all mankind. The last sentence, however, as humorous as it may be to some, seemed to mock what was so beautifully written before. (Only one person's opinion...and I'm not a Judge..smile) Well written!
01/23/06
This was soothing and made my spirit dance. Even the last line...which made me smile. Good job! Kate~
beautifully told. I really enjoyed it. I kind of agree that you should've left out the last line, although it did make me smile. :)
01/26/06
This would make a wonderful morning meditation. I'd leave off the last line, because the mood is so different from the rest of the piece, which is very lovely.