The Official Writing Challenge
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This is wonderful and creative!
07/12/18
Great job with a creative entry and thoughtful dialogue.

A couple of notes: I'd make a separate paragraph between your intro and when you start the news broadcast. Also, check out the forums to brush up on the mechanics of dialogue.

07/12/18
I will now think of what weather I'm broadcasting! This is great!
07/17/18
I love that first line. Very creative entry. God bless!