The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/16
A good devotional on the relationship between God and man through the covenant of marriage.

There were a few grammatical errors. Try to separate the time you spend writing from the time you edit, you'll see more.

I enjoyed having the references. That lets me know that it isn't all opinion.
Good luck on the challenge.
09/03/16
Great job with the topic.
Well done.

Blessings~
09/04/16
Good reminders of God's intent for marriage! Nice job.
This is a concisely written article of relations between husband/wife and Christian/church and Jesus at the time of his coming.

Good Bible knowlege shown.

Nice work.