The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the journey you took through computerland. I can relate. I remember going on a field trip to see a huge computer. I couldn't even begin to manage there would be one in every home, let alone in almost everyone's pocket! Your ending g was nice and was a great reminder. Nice job.
05/30/16
I thought you had some really good descriptive phrases.
05/31/16
Excellent!

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