The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/15
Wow oh Wow! This was a really powerful piece that touched on so many areas of life, and the emotional upheaval of events scored through a lifetime!

Excellent writing! Your internal reflective thoughts were overwhelmingly moving, and authentically presented.

Just really amazing detailed thoughts. I thought this sentence fabulous: This day my frame of dust was physically exhausted

Outstanding work!

God bless you~
01/18/15
I think we all have thoughts of how wonderful heaven will be and wanting to end the trials here on earth. However, most of the time I think of all the people who don't know Him yet, and what can I do to bring them to Christ. Like Paul said, it is better for you if I stay.

This is very well written and a different take on the topic. Blessings, LaVonne
I loved this positive take on the topic. I hope this beautifully written piece gets the credit it deserves.
01/22/15
Congrats
God Bless~