The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
This was done so nicely..I loved the picture you painted.
This is the best thing I've read since Monday Morning..This is beautiful! Thank you
12/07/05
Well done. I love that you had the little girl sneeze.
Well done. It is an amazing thing that something that most gardeners hate so much can be the source of joy for so many children. Spring and dandelions go together!
I like very much the 'circular' aspect to this, and the layering of the picture was beautifully balanced. God bless.
12/09/05
I liked the Maker's laughter and the picture you drew of His delight in the childs enjoyment of His creation. Good visuals.
12/12/05
I did alot of reading - so don't know how I missed this one! But Kudos! Kudos! and Kudos...Great job and Congratulations!
Congratulations on your win...but how do you taste sunshine? Rain I can understand, but I guess I think of feeling or basking in sunshine. Minor point. Good job!