The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice thoughts; a few less questions and a little more follow through on those thoughts would make a thoughtful essay. God bless.
11/29/05
Serious thoughts for us to consider.
11/29/05
"Let's try to improve our vines of communication and relevance to each other and praise our Creator for his blessings, particularly the opportunities He gives us to engage in meaningful dialogue with friends and family and the hopeful vibes or vines we can extend to strangers." Amen to that! But it says so much, I'm afraid people will miss it. Perhaps you could break up this sentence and expound on each thought.
12/01/05
Yes our "vines" need to extend to those who don't know Jesus!
12/02/05
Great little essay gives us a lot to think about! God Bless!
12/02/05
Short but was packing! Very nice thoughts, questions include readers. Enjoyed reading. I agree, that I would have like to have seen it broken up and expounded on a little more. Still good job! God bless ya, littlelight