The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/05
This is my favourite line: What if you see?
My little dreams and foolish hope,
Yet still you bring your presence close

Beautiful imagery! Great job on this!
11/17/05
A very delicate and sweetly soothing work.
Wondeful rhythm and meter that works in so well with your message. Beautifully done. I really loved this.
11/19/05
A lot of wonderful images in this poem. I had to read it twice!
11/20/05
This is a beautifully layered and personal poem. Perfect. I'm reminded of the Metaphysical poets. Yeggy