The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/05
I appreciate Roxanne's honesty with God--not all our prayers are pretty! With a few edits (spacing, typos, word choice), this would be a top-notch story.
I agree about the editing but this is a very strong story, and very honest. Forgiving those who hurt us is hard and you show your characters inner struggle well. Good piece
of writing, alot to enjoy here. Placing her situation along side current events gave it great balance. God bless.