The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your article,it would be a great devotional. I love the story about the mansion in heaven. Good job.
I agree 100%. Jesus is our reward and what a reward he is. Heaven is beyond of imagination and being their is the desire in every believers heart. Thank you.
Good title and content. Execution however, was not good. Many errors and no consistency in lines. I took the story about the mansions in heaven as a joke, because there is no place in scripture that saids I can do anything to earn a mansion, I have a mansion because God saids I do. Practice, practice, and you will get better.
I enjoyed your story but tend to agree the flow was a bit awkward. Keep writing!