The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/05
Wow! What imagery! In the end, your story was tied together so well. The overall tone was one that is rare in storytelling anymore, but needed. Great job!
02/02/05
Beautifully descriptive. Nice flow from beginning to end. Nice to see no mistakes too! I think it's just me, but the opening line had me go looking for exactly what the gossamer that covered the moon was, but you never told me.
02/05/05
A joy to read. Thanks. (Even though the content wasn't exactly joyful!)
Good word imagery. God bless you.
Wonderfully beautiful description. My favorite line was this, "Word upon recorded word wasting her away, until nothing more than the dying ember of all that could have been remained."

You have a lovely, delicate, poetic style. Wondeful job!
02/06/05
Great storytelling! Loved it!